Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Eellogofusciouhipoppokunurious ~ A to Z Challenge: Day 5

It is a real word, I swear, that means.........   Good.

I'm using this as a reminder that my writing needs to be tight.  I mean, seriously? Did we need that many letters to say 'Yay!'? I have found in my voracious reading that there are some really great books out there, and some really not great ones, but there are also some good books that could be great if only the writing was a little tighter. 

We should be going through our MS with a fine tooth comb, slashing every word that isn't necessary, making sure our chosen language style isn't burdensome... before we let even our beta reader/agent/editor look at it. It then becomes less work for them as they read through, and less work for us on the other side. 

Once I have scaled down to the bare bones idea of each sentence, I can then reread and decide if I need to be more descriptive in some areas, or if there is room for more showing in others.  I ask myself questions:

Does this paragraph make sense?
Does this sentence adequately present the image I am trying to describe?
Is this grammattically correct?
Is there another way I can say this?
Is that the absolute maximum amount of 'that's' that I can use in that sentence?
Where the hell is my thesaurus?

It's all basic writer 101, I know, but it works.

And it's all eellogofusciouhipoppokunurious, ya know?

4 comments:

  1. That's ridiculous! Now, floccinaucinihilipilification is pronounceable and slightly ironic - it's a great conversation starter - and now that I mention it, why the HECK didn't I make THAT my post for Thursday - which, incidentally, isn't Friday (another lovely f-word) but oughta be!

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  2. Ha ha! That's a good one... but pronounceable? Thanks for checking in. :^)

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  3. Wow, that's a mouthful! I'd like to see a video of you saying that three times real fast. :-)

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  4. I'm not even going to try to pronounce that one. Is that an English word, or something else? Amazing. Great reminder to keep it simple.

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